Thursday, October 23, 2008

animal farm paragraph

In "Animal Farm" the animals beleive napolens lies for a number of reasons. One is that the animals could not see that anything was wrong.In the story Squealer convinces the animals that all is well and the are doing better than they did with jones.The pigs also made napolen look like a hero.In the story he was called "the father of all animals and the protector of the sheep fold".They also turned the animals against snowball. They made him look like a coward when they spoke of him.So the animals are dependent on napolen to tell them whats ture and whats lies.

1 comment:

Constitution Melville said...

You have good intro and conclusion sentences, and your yellows are solid.

However, you only have one red sentence for each yellow, and you only have one quote.